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Thursday, September 22, 2011

Oh! so tender


The quick blinking of your eye,
Like the clutter of wings of a butterfly,
Oh! So tender it is.

Your lips on the verge of smile,
Making me loose my guile,
Oh! So tender it is.

You talking innocently like a kid,
Forgetting line of yours in the mid,
Oh! So tender it is.

Bothering you the loose strands of your hair,
And you getting annoyed due to something so rare,
Oh! So tender it is.

10 comments:

sowmya said...

this is ....the best piece which i liked :) very beautiful lines

Saru Singhal said...

Oh, so nice. I went with the flow of words...:) Beautiful...

Vivacious said...

Very nice.... beautiful composition... :)

Skywalker said...

Thanks Sowmya and Saru

@Vivacious: appreciation from you always makes my day :)

Menachery said...

awww thats so beautifulll.... i was wanting to keep reading ..loved it .... :) keep writing more of em :)

SEPO said...

beautiful!! :-)

seriously!

swati said...

tenderly framed words givin it a beautiful effect, all in all.. :)

Skywalker said...

@Sepo: Thanku so much and welcome to my blog, keep reading...

@Swati: Thankooo :) :)

Varuna Raina said...

NYC...

Kalyan said...

lovely words...nicely crafted lines!